The Herald Sun's Jay Clark wins an AGB brick bat for willfully descriptive journalism:
"If he [Aaron Davey] wanted to get caught in the sweet, sticky glue pot chasing the bigger possession tallies floating across half back, he could."
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By omitting a "by" in between "pot" and "chasing" it reads like there is a sweet, sticky glue pot chasing big possession tallies floating across the Demons' half back line, rather than a human in the form of Aaron Davey.
Posted by: Big Ramifications | 25 July 2010 at 19:27
Jay shouldn't be sniffing so much glue.
Posted by: m0nty | 25 July 2010 at 20:04